Score: 7

"Better"

submission: Random Stick Jump

date: October 2, 2005

I watched your one before, and this is better, the graphics are great, but prehaps a backing track would be nice.
I've tested it and i reccomend linkin park's faint, then it should scratch off the track when "nail factory" unveils.
That would be better, otherwise, the sounds could be improved with a sign falling sound.
Otherwise, good short, and good stick animation (better than most).

James Prankard Inc

Score: 7

"Personally i enjoyed the ending best"

submission: My Kung Fu

date: October 2, 2005

I found this looking for my movie "Gangster vs kung fu", and supprise, it's almost like a remake of my movie.
This was funny, a bit repetitive though, but the end was good, keep it up!!!

James Prankard Inc

Score: 7

"Good"

submission: When Inglor Attacks

date: September 25, 2005

Reached 311, but they get pretty fast.
Better than i thought it would be...

Score: 9

"Yay, Part 3!!!"

submission: PALADIN episode 3

date: September 22, 2005

OK, good storyline, very interesting... Can't wait for part 4. Sux i have to wait another 6 months!!!
Anyway, i love your animations, keep it up, it was all good. Except not enough action in this one. Definatly something for an original section of the collections page with such a great series.
Personally i like the second one best. That scene with linkin park and the monster splittin in half is awesome.
Hope this gets people looking at the rest of the series.
One comment, speaking sound was pretty poor on my speakers. Too loud and makes it muffled.
I want MORE!

James Prankard Inc

Score: 5

"This has potential"

submission: GG - Dual_Glock Games

date: September 17, 2005

Well, the trilogy of games.
Wanna know waht i thought? Then read on...
Well, the first game was alright, in fact the start was great graphics untill it actually got to the game. The game was a button on the left that basicly when you click it you watch the "health" go down to zero. (That isn't very entertaing...) But what you should do is create the button within the movie clip on his head. So then you have to shoot themoving head. THEN... you want to add another variable called "yourhealth" and have an invisable movie clip on screen saying yourhealth -=1 add a few blank frames, then tell it to gotoAndplay(1);
Then write if (yourhealth == 0) {
gotoAndStop("gameover")
}
Sumthing like that. Then you have a counter for your health going down. This should make the game a LOT better. Btw uber wade was pretty funny. And this game does have potential...

Now, the othergames the clown game... honestly this isn't a game... it's justWIERD :-/

And the final and third game... the background looks good m8. Good actionscripting so far... (i like the fact that you can't go off the screen). And it's fun to see tom fart.

The best Glock submission seen yet (sorry, i don't like glocks)

But otherwise keep it up m8.

James Prankard Inc

Score: 7

"The guy before me was a divvie."

submission: Boardin'

date: September 16, 2005

Yes, he was stupid. There WERE instructions, there WAS a score.
Than graphics were really good and the style was great. However the gameplay wasn't so great. I didn't get past 40 seconds of gameplay, it got too hard. It wasn't clear what was in your path or not, when it looks like you were gonna miss something it hit it.
THe intructions though should of beenmore specific, for example, if you pressed jump and left you did a wheelie, then if you pressed it again, (or another combination), it did a kick ass HUGE air. But if you specify this it amy be better, otherwise, there was no SOUND, it really make it seem really bad, btw the music your your Sexy Newgrounds should fit perfect for this game...
And finaly, you probably want a button on the game saying back to menu for the divs who can't be arsed to look at the instructions before playing the game (see the guy below)..

Otherwise keep it up m8.

James Prankard Inc

Score: 9

"Woot Woot"

submission: In too deep 1 minute

date: September 10, 2005

That was great, i was expecting a shit flash, anyways, It was great, i can't believe you lost loads of good flash.
OK, the camera angles were really good, great use of fbf to make it look more 3d than 2d. Anyways, just wow. Keep it up please.

The graphics were great and the way you did it was better.

James Prankard Inc

Score: 7

"That was a good game"

submission: Drop! 1.5

date: August 27, 2005

Rite, your stlye of animation was fantastic, i loved the simplicity of the whole thing. The animation was fine, the actionscripting was perfect, i liked the way you had random block generator. Good job!
Some colour would be nice, although it might ruin your style so i am not too sure about that one.
SOund was ok, prehaps some jumping and landing sounds would be nice, just please don't make them too irritating, and prehaps some background music may be helpful.
But that was a great game.

Good job mate.

James Prankard Inc

Score: 5

"Supprising"

submission: Bucket Ball *Demo*

date: August 27, 2005

Again like the last review, this was supprisingly addictive. But the graphics were poor. You really need to work on that because i know you can probable do better. For starters, make the ball be 2d with a gradient, secondly have a BACKGROUND! Nothing more boring than staring into a void.
Again, Sound would be good. There are some addicive backing tracks in the audio portal for you to use, but also include some sound effects for when you drop and catch etc.
Otherwise, no bugs and it isn't too bad.

James Prankard Inc

Score: 2

"Well..."

submission: Metal slug Vs megaman

date: August 22, 2005

Time to begin another review...
I watched this movie from the link from the front page.
Anyways, you need to get rid of that audio, it makes the file size way too long for something so small.
Anyways, the sprites look ok, but a bit glitchey, the next button wasn't aligned, so you need to go to onion skin option to fix it and you can fine tune it by zooming it and using the arrow keys to move it around.
Next, it was too short to start off with, there was no story line, i don't know why they were figting or how they know each other. And again it was way too short.

Anyways, enough with my boring word, keep trying adn i hope you keep these tips on mind for the game you are creating.

James Prankard Inc