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Again like the last review, this was supprisingly addictive. But the graphics were poor. You really need to work on that because i know you can probable do better. For starters, make the ball be 2d with a gradient, secondly have a BACKGROUND! Nothing more boring than staring into a void.
Again, Sound would be good. There are some addicive backing tracks in the audio portal for you to use, but also include some sound effects for when you drop and catch etc.
Otherwise, no bugs and it isn't too bad.
James Prankard Inc
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Cool, thanks for all that!
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Time to begin another review...
I watched this movie from the link from the front page.
Anyways, you need to get rid of that audio, it makes the file size way too long for something so small.
Anyways, the sprites look ok, but a bit glitchey, the next button wasn't aligned, so you need to go to onion skin option to fix it and you can fine tune it by zooming it and using the arrow keys to move it around.
Next, it was too short to start off with, there was no story line, i don't know why they were figting or how they know each other. And again it was way too short.
Anyways, enough with my boring word, keep trying adn i hope you keep these tips on mind for the game you are creating.
James Prankard Inc
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I've decided to not try a game but a prequel to this I might try the game later on.. like to go with the prequel
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Yeah, a BLAM CLOCK submission used for my audio. THIS DAY ROCKS...
Keep up the good flash and feel free to use my audio.
This movie kicks clock ass!
Next you should do something about the fuckin stupid Glocks....
Anyway, i await another of your submissions.
Ciao
James Prankard Inc
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BangBang was is a great song, it works great with cock on lock sex scenes.
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You should really keep this series going, kinda like the style of southpark. Anyway the character is great and the detail on the violance everyone will think is great. If you get some voice actors and another storyline it will definatly make front page.
THIS IS NEWGROUNDS MATERIAL.
Please keep it going... I demand more
P.S That preloader button made was GREAT!
James Prankard Inc - Keep it up
Author's Response:
wow, thanks alot!! muchly appreciated! the storylines will be greatly improved and as for voices. once i get a new mi i'll be adding them too. thanks again
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To improve this you really need some examples and add some colout please.
Author's Response:
sry that there are no examples , i havent had any time.
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Killer rabbits???? Hmm, wierd concept, unfortuntly not much storyline though...
Need to work more on the hand animation because it is hard to tell what the rabits are doing, otherwise good and odd flash.
James Prankard Inc
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Very good flash, and it was well put together with good use of japanese manga speed lines and techniques. Good use of blur too!!!
Good flash, i enjoyed it!
James Prankard Inc
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The only reason this is getting a 2 is because it is too short...
Otherwise if it was longer and actually had a decent long fight it should reach a 4.
James Prankard Inc
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This is getting an overall rating of 3, it deserves at least a 4, the menu and the game over and the score make it look like a pro game. As for the actionscript it was flawless.
Only that the game itself looks a little plain...
But i think it is flash o shizzle....
James Prankard Inc
Author's Response:
Well, I am a programmer rather than an artist. On my next project I'll make sure that I work with someone more artistically inclined.
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Well, your flash skills are incredible, it was very well put together and fantasticly animated. All in all that part was great....
butttttt...... (btw all my reviews have a but...)
STORYLINE - Nothing in that movie really made sense to me, where for the chicken coop for example? and why were there 2 devils? and why did you even need a devil (it was cute though)!
I can see this being a very promising flash for the future that can easily make front page with a style like that.
Good luck.
James Prankard Inc
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