JPI's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[PALADIN episode 3]

Yay, Part 3!!!

OK, good storyline, very interesting... Can't wait for part 4. Sux i have to wait another 6 months!!!
Anyway, i love your animations, keep it up, it was all good. Except not enough action in this one. Definatly something for an original section of the collections page with such a great series.
Personally i like the second one best. That scene with linkin park and the monster splittin in half is awesome.
Hope this gets people looking at the rest of the series.
One comment, speaking sound was pretty poor on my speakers. Too loud and makes it muffled.
I want MORE!

James Prankard Inc

[Metal slug Vs megaman]

Well...

Time to begin another review...
I watched this movie from the link from the front page.
Anyways, you need to get rid of that audio, it makes the file size way too long for something so small.
Anyways, the sprites look ok, but a bit glitchey, the next button wasn't aligned, so you need to go to onion skin option to fix it and you can fine tune it by zooming it and using the arrow keys to move it around.
Next, it was too short to start off with, there was no story line, i don't know why they were figting or how they know each other. And again it was way too short.

Anyways, enough with my boring word, keep trying adn i hope you keep these tips on mind for the game you are creating.

James Prankard Inc

Vamped responds:

I've decided to not try a game but a prequel to this I might try the game later on.. like to go with the prequel

[FRAN the little goth girl]

A great start

You should really keep this series going, kinda like the style of southpark. Anyway the character is great and the detail on the violance everyone will think is great. If you get some voice actors and another storyline it will definatly make front page.
THIS IS NEWGROUNDS MATERIAL.

Please keep it going... I demand more

P.S That preloader button made was GREAT!

James Prankard Inc - Keep it up

poisonkiss responds:

wow, thanks alot!! muchly appreciated! the storylines will be greatly improved and as for voices. once i get a new mi i'll be adding them too. thanks again

[The Story of Tortoise]

That was... odd

Killer rabbits???? Hmm, wierd concept, unfortuntly not much storyline though...
Need to work more on the hand animation because it is hard to tell what the rabits are doing, otherwise good and odd flash.

James Prankard Inc

[mumta ninja]

The only reason

The only reason this is getting a 2 is because it is too short...
Otherwise if it was longer and actually had a decent long fight it should reach a 4.

James Prankard Inc

[Erica's Farm 2]

Here we go for another review

Well, your flash skills are incredible, it was very well put together and fantasticly animated. All in all that part was great....

butttttt...... (btw all my reviews have a but...)

STORYLINE - Nothing in that movie really made sense to me, where for the chicken coop for example? and why were there 2 devils? and why did you even need a devil (it was cute though)!

I can see this being a very promising flash for the future that can easily make front page with a style like that.

Good luck.

James Prankard Inc

[celebrity punchout]

Wow

Wow, i expected a lot worse, well done...

Made me laugh.

And good voice actors or use of voice clips!

Ciao

James Prankard Inc

mackain responds:

thank you!

[Icons Ep 1]

ok

Well, you have a great sense of humor, and i really enjoyed the flash. But PLEASE there is nothing more frustating that pressing a button that doesn't want you to click it. Make your hit areas better please. So because of the floor i only give it a 4/5.

Good luck with further submissions!